Sunday, October 25, 2015

Patricia Smith: Day 3; Poem Draft Exercise

Take another 5-10 minutes to complete your analysis of the Patricia Smith poetry. After reporting out to the rest of the class, let's go to the lab for a writing assignment.

LAB: using your chosen news article, please use it to inspire a poem draft. Use Patricia Smith's and my example as models for your own poem. Style/length, etc. is up to you.

Please attach your newspaper article (or cite it) with your poem draft.

A picture is worth a thousand words they say. Consider the ekphrastic poetry form:
If you finish earlier than the end of the period, please write a second or third poem and turn these in as extra credit. Next class we will be viewing John Brown/Jacob Lawrence's art. Start here at the links.

John Brown History
Intro to Jacob Lawrence
HOMEWORK: None. Please bring a writing journal (and your coat) to our next class. We will be taking a short field trip.

Thursday, October 22, 2015

Patricia Smith: Poetry & News, Day 2

After discussing the test & strategies, let's get back to Patricia Smith & her poetry.

Essential Questions: How does Smith’s work interact with facts, quotes, and documents? What can a poem achieve that a newspaper article cannot? What can a newspaper article achieve that a poem cannot? Are truth and fact the same thing? 
After reading the model with us, get into your small groups and read Patricia Smith's poem(s).
As you read annotate literary elements (for the poetry),
  • evidence of the journalistic function & evidence of investigative journalism,
  • evidence of journalistic ethics and bias, and
  • identify the hook or lead for the poem
Then: it's off to the lab.

LAB TASK: Use your homework (choosing a news article) to write the draft of a poem inspired by the news article. Complete the draft and turn in for credit.

HOMEWORK: None.

Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Patricia Smith; Selections from Blood Dazzler


This afternoon please take the next 20-30 minutes to complete the revision for one of your 300-400 word articles (probably the one you workshopped, but either one will do, provided that you have revised and cleaned up or improved the article.)


 
Please SEND me a Google Doc (share with bradley.craddock@rcsdk12.org) so that I can revise/publish your work on our school journal page.
When you complete this task, please turn your attention to the handout articles (or complete and turn in your homework--see below for details!)

Patricia Smith: Journalist or Poet? A Response to Katrina
 
 
Essential Questions: Is Smith a journalist? Why or why not? How does Smith’s fabrication of quotes and characters relate to the reading you’ve done about ethics (see post below)? What responsibility does a journalist have to her readers? Why is this responsibility important or valued by our society?

Please read the handouts/articles linked here for a background on our subject today!

During period 7 please read/think/take notes on what you read concerning Patricia Smith. Then, it's off to the next room (238) to discuss the issue as a class.


Part two:


Essential Questions: How does Smith’s work interact with facts, quotes, and documents? What can a poem achieve that a newspaper article cannot? What can a newspaper article achieve that a poem cannot? Are truth and fact the same thing? 


After reading the model with us, get into your small groups and read Patricia Smith's poem(s). As you read annotate literary elements (for the poetry), evidence of the journalistic function & evidence of investigative journalism, evidence of journalistic ethics and bias, and identify the hook or lead for the poem.

HOMEWORK: Find and print out or bring a copy of an important or interesting news article to class.

Friday, October 16, 2015

Black Like Me Test; Article Revision

In the lab today, please complete the test on Black Like Me. You may use your notes/books for the test.

After completing the test, please choose one of your two articles to revise. See revision notes from last class as a guide. You will be graded on the quality & accuracy of your article. Please SEND ME your completed article as a SHARED GOOGLE document: bradley.craddock@rcsdk12.org

HOMEWORK: Please read and annotate the article on Libel (see handout). 

Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Article Workshop; Editing Responsibilities; Black Like Me Discussion

This afternoon the students who have completed their 2 articles (see previous posts) will meet for a workshop/revision session during period 7. Students who have not yet completed their writing should complete their 2 articles in the lab and turn in drafts to me.

During period 8, please return to room 238 for a Socratic Seminar discussion on Black Like Me.

WORKSHOP/REVISION TIPS:
  • Examine the hook or lead. Does the lead interest you as a reader? What can be done to improve the lead? Keep leads in active voice, not passive voice. Give your partner(s) advice about their lead.
  • Examine the sentences in the article. This is not the time to get flowery and ramble on like we do in fiction or poetry. Journalistic writing tends to be straight to the point. Keep your sentences active, short, concise, short, and to the point. What can your partner do to correct their sentence structure? With your pen, cross out any word or phrase that does not need to be included.
  • Examine structure. You may remind the writer to use the inverted pyramid format, or the template we covered in class. See the other side of your handout for details! How might your writing peers use these formats to strengthen their writing? Suggest ways to rearrange the article to strengthen it!
  • Use the best facts/quotes. Did your partner(s) use quotes or facts to support their "reporting"? What sentences seem like opinion? Highlight these opinions and ask your partner(s) to provide proof!
  • All facts and quotes need citation. Did your partner(s) provide evidence of their source? Where did they get that info about %'s or those quotes?
  • Adjectives rarely evoke visual imagery. Instead of weak adjectives, use strong, specific nouns. Avoid adverbs at all cost! Help your partner by crossing out any adverbs! Circle adjectives on the draft. Writers: take this information and remove adverbs--consider a better noun near those circled adjectives!
Black Like Me Discussion Questions:
1. Griffin became an international celebrity after publication of his article in Sepia magazine and later his book, Black Like Me. However, he also faced open hostility throughout the American South, including being burned in effigy in his hometown. What might today's reaction be if the book had just been published?
2. What motivates Griffin to change the color of his skin and take on the identify of a black man? Would you do something similar to "get the story"?
3. "Black men told me that the only way a white man could hope to understand anything about this reality was to wake up some morning in a black man's skin." Talk about his reaction as Griffin looks in the mirror and first sees a black man peering back at him. He feels he has lost his identity. How would you feel if you changed the color of your skin? How does skin color affect identity? Is skin color a more powerful determinant than gender?
4. What do you consider as the most difficult experience that Griffin faced as a black man? What angered or depressed him—or you—the most?
5. How did you respond to the white men's attitude toward African-American sexuality (88-93)? How does that stance dehumanize black men and women? And what does it say about white men who are so obsessed by the idea of black sexuality?
6. Griffin spends a day with his acquaintance P.D. East, and the two discuss racism and the law in the South. Talk about the ways in which prejudice was incorporated into the South's legal code.
7. How does the treatment Griffin receives at the hands of white people affect him? What does he notice about himself after a couple of weeks? Do you think his experience of racism was harder for Griffin because he was white...or easier because he was white?
8. Talk about Griffin's time in Montgomery, Alabama, and the young Martin Luther King, Jr., back then a still unknown figure outside the South.
9. What were some of the other positive things Griffin experienced? What about those who rose above the cruelty of hatred and intolerence? In what way did they offer hope?
10. The book was published in 1959, (even "before the first Freedom Rides or any other manifestation of national concern about racial injustice"). How far has the nation come in the past 50 years. Beyond the most obvious fact that the country elected an African-American president, to what extent—and how—does racism continue to show itself? What racial injustices, faced by Griffin in 1959, still exist today?
11. Follow-up to Question 10: What would Griffin experience if he were to attempt his project today?
12. Even with his darkened skin, John Howard Griffin was still a white man. Was it possible for him to truly experience life as a black man? Is his book well-meaning but arrogant in its attempt to speak of another race's experiences? Or do you think Black Like me offers a critical perspective because it is the closest that any white person could ever come to experiencing—and thus understanding—racial intolerance?
13. Re-read the last paragraph on page 92 ("Living in the country...") Taking into consideration that many black folk are deprived of "the pleasures of the spirit" what changes in our society or mindset TODAY can help foster more opportunities for the future generation? [side note: according to Schott Report: in 2015, black male graduation rates for NY were 57%, compared to 85% for white males. Rochester tends to be about 1/2 that percentage (approx. 27% graduation rate for 2015) and traditionally trails NY state averages in all areas] More information can be found here online.
14. Journalistic writing has a distinct style. Writers often use strong nouns and active verbs, as opposed to adjectives and adverbs to do the work. There are fewer poetic devices used, although these can be present based on a writer's personal style. Clear and concise are the key words to describe journalistic writing style. How was the style of this book different from Chew on This? What did you notice or learn about writing from reading this book? What advice about writing rises to the surface for you in reading this book?
15. Other issues/topics to discuss?

HOMEWORK: Prepare for your test on the book Black Like Me. Turn in any missing work.

Thursday, October 8, 2015

Student Newspapers: Article #2 (or #3)

Please turn in your homework (the Teen Huffington Post assignment)!

(Teen Huffington Post

Using the link above, read and surf this site for ideas for our own News Blog Site for SOTA Students. Choose 1 article from this site to review. In a paragraph or two explain: a). summarize the article (include title and author), b). what is the journalist function of the article? and c). what is your opinion of the article?)

Task #1: 300-400 word article #2

Write an article that you feel would appeal to the readers of a school newspaper. Research one of the the following topics or brainstorm a topic of your own to write about. Use the links below to help you research, compile notes/sources, and write an article of 300-400 words that serves as one of the functions of journalism. Keep ethics and the news template in mind as you write!:

Turn in your article by end of class! Note: please use single-space and two columns for your article. You may also fully justify your text. (full justify as opposed to left justify)

If you finish early, please feel free to gain extra credit by writing a 3rd article on another topic (or use the NY Times list)

Task #2: Read the instructions/details below. Examine 3 news journalism articles from any of these sites. For each article, identify the kind of lead used. Turn in your assessment by end of class today. Make sure you indicate what article you read and who the author was.

Site One: The Washington Post
Site Two: The San Francisco Globe
Site Three: (your choice--find a news article on the web and review 1 article)


EQ: What is a lead and how to write it?

ACTIVITIES:  Writing leads exercise
Work on newspaper articles for October newspaper

MINI-LESSON:
Writing leads:

WHY LEADS ARE VITAL: Don Frey, noted writing teacher, puts it well: The lead to a story "grabs the reader, informs the reader, and teaches the reader how to read the rest of the story." Author John McPhee says the lead is the "flashlight that shines into a story." One other key point: A newspaper reader is likely to spend only a few seconds deciding whether to read a story. If the lead does not grab the reader, the writer's work is in vain.

TYPES OF LEADS: There are two types of leads: direct (hard) and indirect (soft).

Generally, use the direct lead for news stories, and the indirect lead for features. However, this is only a guideline. Whatever the form, the reader is looking for news; don't delay it long.

There are other kinds of leads:
  • the question,
  • the quote,
  • the one-word,
  • the anecdote (made popular by the Wall Street Journal)

They all have their places, but use these hooks/openers sparingly.

Article Advice:

START EARLY: While covering an event or interviewing a person, think about what is important. Strive to focus a story as your report it. Circle key elements in your notebook. As you return to the office, talk to yourself about the story and block out a lead in your mind.

SWEAT IT: Rewrite the lead until it's right, or at least the best that you can produce on deadline. Hang loose. Play with the words and the ideas. You can always rely on the 5 Ws (who, what, where, when, why), but can you be more imaginative?

BE HONEST: You want to hook the reader, but don't hype the lead, promising more than you deliver. "The lead is a contract with the reader," says Don Murray, a writing coach. "The story must document the lead."

KEEP IT TIGHT: Short leads are more likely to snag a reader. If your lead is over 35 words, it probably is too long. Review the lead. Are you packing too much into it?

WHEN STUCK: Sometimes, the lead refuses to be born. Don't panic. Try some of these tricks:

• Review the basics. What, in simple, ABC terms, is the story about? What is the main news angle? If you were telling the story to a friend, how would you start it?
 
• Write an imperfect lead, give the piece a sense of direction, and repair the lead later. This ploy can work well. 

Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Black Like Me Discussion; 300-400 Word School Article

Review from last lesson:
  • Introduction (1st paragraph) 3 sentences (your hook, your lead-in, and your thesis). 
  • 2nd paragraph (3 sentences): a hook (topic sentence), an example, and a concluding statement summing up sentence 1 & 2. This should connect somehow to your introduction.
  • 3rd paragraph (3-4 sentences): 3-4 sentences connected to the 2nd paragraph to further discussion of the topic/thesis of the article. This might be a good place to put your facts, details, etc.
  • 4th paragraph (2 sentences): concluding statement & last, but not least, a restatement of your claim (thesis) and perhaps a reason we should care. 
Discussion of Black Like Me (pages 1-101): Function and Ethics of Journalists

As you discuss in your groups, please complete the handout provided. Turn in at end of assignment for participation credit.

LAB: 

Task #1: 300-400 word article #2

Write an article that you feel would appeal to the readers of a school newspaper. Research one of the the following topics or brainstorm a topic of your own to write about. Use the links below to help you research, compile notes/sources, and write an article of 300-400 words that serves as one of the functions of journalism. Keep ethics and the news template in mind as you write!:
Turn in your article by end of class (even if you are not done!) Note: please use single-space and two columns for your article. You may also fully justify your text. (full justify as opposed to left justify)


Using the link above, read and surf this site for ideas for our own News Blog Site for SOTA Students. Choose 1 article from this site to review. In a paragraph or two explain: a). summarize the article (include title and author), b). what is the journalist function of the article? and c). what is your opinion of the article?

HOMEWORK: Please read pages 102-121 (November 24-25) in Black Like Me. Read and take note of the handout "Meeting Ethical and Legal Responsibilities"; Complete Task #2 if you did not get to complete it during class.

Friday, October 2, 2015

300-400 Word Article Assignment

Newspaper journalists usually write a column or are given "inches" to fill for each edition. For an explanation of this, please take a moment to read the short article at this link.

Golden journalist rule: One inch = about 30-35 words.

Today, after your open note quiz, you will write an article in the lab that will be about 8-10 "inches" (300-400 words).

300 Word Articles--the short and long of it!
There is a special kind of magazine/news article known as the 300-word article. Here is your next assignment and some "articles" about it and examples:

1. Use the link below to find a topic you would like to write about:

2. Once you have selected your topic, research and write a 300-400 word article.

3. Write your 300-400 word article by changing your paper to 2-columns (in other words, the writing should appear as two columns on the paper you hand in). Change your paper layout design to accommodate this.

4. Proofread and turn in when completed to complete this assignment.

Tips about writing a 300 word article by journalist Brian Nelson: 

"I am a professional writer and editor. This experience has led me to see that there are two types of three hundred word articles, those that are short and worthless, and those that are the shortest possible way to say something worthwhile.
Three hundred words sounds like a lot, but it only is to a child attempting to fulfill a quota on a boring topic.  To illustrate, I would like to point out that as you finish reading this particular sentence, you have just read 125 words. In other words, by finishing the introduction and half of the second paragraph you have read almost half of a 300 word article.
Thus, four or five paragraphs of three to five sentences each is all that a 300 word article would contain. Both writer and editor may benefit, then, from a template of sorts that ensures both readability and value in such limited writing space.
While many such templates are possible, one of the easiest to use and remember is to write an introduction of three sentences.  Then, a second paragraph which consists of a provocative first sentence.  A second sentence containing an example, and a third sentence summing up the first and second sentence in the form of a conclusion.
The third paragraph is three or four sentences applying the principals discussed in the second paragraph.  Depending upon the audience for the article, this is where the writer would discuss using the information in daily life, business, or for persuading others.  Also, any suggested paradigms.
Lastly, a concluding paragraph consisting of two sentences, one of which restates the introduction and the second of which claims the article supplies the proof or answer, depending upon the article being written.  Using this template, anyone can write useful 300 word articles in just minutes." (--by Brian Nelson)
So, if we take Mr. Nelson's advice, we have the following breakdown template:

  • Introduction (1st paragraph) 3 sentences (your hook, your lead-in, and your thesis). 
  • 2nd paragraph (3 sentences): a hook (topic sentence), an example, and a concluding statement summing up sentence 1 & 2. This should connect somehow to your introduction.
  • 3rd paragraph (3-4 sentences): 3-4 sentences connected to the 2nd paragraph to further discussion of the topic/thesis of the article. This might be a good place to put your facts, details, etc.
  • 4th paragraph (2 sentences): concluding statement & last, but not least, a restatement of your claim (thesis) and perhaps a reason we should care. 

Links for further help if you need it:
HOMEWORK: Complete assignments you did not complete already (see previous HOMEWORK on earlier posts!)

Black Like Me. Please read pages 77-101 (November 15-November 21). As you read, please notice the function of the journalist. Be prepared to discuss how John Howard Griffin is fulfilling that duty and responsibility of a journalist in his book (pages 1-101). Look for textual examples to support your claim.

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